Eel Writing

today in room 4 we wrote creative writing based on a book we wrote about Eels and we got to choose if we wanted to be the eel or the human. I chose the eel. Here is my writing hope you like it and if you have any questions leave them in the comments




I dart through the water on the hunt for my next meal. My stomach grumbles as I hunt. I was so hungry I could eat a rock. But the meal I have been looking forward to my whole life was the man. I had heard tales for the wise eels, about this young man who tastes as fine. One day I saw him this man he was caring a bone hook with fresh meat on the end . he scurried up the tall totara tree, he swung his line into my river. I had been told not to bite anything that had been thrown into the water. I was so hungry I had to take a bite. I pull back and forth and man pulls back forth until twack the line had snapped and both of us went back and hit our heads and I never saw the man again