Tossing,
luring,
Silently lurking
beneath the overgrowth.
Tugging,
whipping,
making it harder for me.
Slipping,
falling, then SNAP...he won
Monday, 2 September 2019
Eel poem
last week on the 27/8/19 we took a trip down to the Hustlers to look at their pet long-finned eels. We took down smelly venison to feed them. it was a muggy day in Matawai so some of the eels were still hiding. But we did end up getting to see about 4. We got back to school and wrote some poems.
Tossing,
luring,
Silently lurking
beneath the overgrowth.
Tugging,
whipping,
making it harder for me.
Slipping,
falling, then SNAP...he won
Tossing,
luring,
Silently lurking
beneath the overgrowth.
Tugging,
whipping,
making it harder for me.
Slipping,
falling, then SNAP...he won
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